Last night I visited 4H’s blog at Russell Scott Primary School and read their fantastic 3 -ed sentences. 5SK would like to try to create some examples of their own.
4h2013.russellscottblogs.net
Scared, paralysed, terrified, as the shadows circled hungrily under the sinking boat.
Mortified, shocked, petrified, as he struggles to land the death defying stunt in front of the gasping crowd.
Gasped, shuddered, tensed, as the lion circled us like hyenas circling their prey.
Thank you for showing us a strategy to improve our writing. We can add this to our knowledge of tightening tension.
Dear Mrs Scharf and 5SK,
Wow, what wonderful writing! We are so pleased to see that we have helped to inspire you. I cannot wait to show my class your work tomorrow. We have just started blogging this September. 4H are really enjoying it and learning so much from schools and classes like you.
Kind regards,
Miss Higgins & 4H