Disabled Kids Must Have a Better Future
Dear leaders of the world,
How would you like your child to be diagnosed or born with a life long disease? You wouldn’t like it. So why should it be different for other children around the world. Everyday kids and families wake up in the morning with a dark, gloomy could like a never ending nightmare around them. All children have a right to wake up and go to school, learn and make great friends.
Many other people and myself strongly believe that it is now imperative that these children have a better future.
Sincerely yours,
Jemma
I think your right. I really like the way you have used lots of interesting vocabulary to persuade the reader to agree with you. Well done!
Well done Jemma, this is how it should be !!! You’re right, I’m staying with you!
Hi Jemma
What an impassioned plea for your cause! I think your initial question is a great way to start a persuasive letter – forcing the world leaders to put themselves in Lucy’s place. I also like the way you finish your piece – you have chosen to use much more formal vocabulary which I think sounds very business like and sincere. Well done.