One Sunny Beach
Crunch! That was the sound of hard little grains of sand. I was marching on the sand and I was wondering, ‘But where could I go?” I was thinking of places but it finally hit me, I wanted to go to Mars. It’s not impossible so I might give it a try. I ran home and made a spaceship. I blasted up into space and I realised that I forgot my spacesuit. I was floating up in the air like a balloon. Then there was a weird looking thing on Mars. I didn’t know what it was but then I realised it was an ……..
Emma
This is a good blog post of the 100 word challenge.Also the story was great.But it needs more description.
Hello Emma, we are in Hunstanton in England. We like your piece of writing because you have punctuated the speech correctly and we like the short opening sentence.