The dark forest leaves wave around as glowing eyes surround me from all corners. I hear a loud scream. The sun disappears faster than my dinner which I haven’t eaten for a long time. My vision goes blurry when fog surrounds me. I see a dark figure in the distance and I start to head towards it. Trees start collapsing, suddenly something pokes me on the back. I look around in fear and see a dark ghostly figure behind me. I start running but seem to be going nowhere! There’s no point running, there’s no point running. I’M DEAD!
You made me want to read more! Great Job!!
i love how you made me want to read more. Keep up
It was very mysterious and it made me want to read more. It was amazing!
Very mysterious. Why didn’t the kid eat dinner
Very mysterious. Why didn’t the kid eat dinner?
I love the way you had a lot of action in your story.
I really like it a lot! Beautiful adjectives and vocabulary. Good job!