“Full sail!” shouts the captain of the ship as we voyage out into deep dark sea. I see a giant black object soaring through the air. Bang, the captain ducks down and shouts, “Take cover!” Another cannon ball hits the side of the ship where the gunpowder is rumbling. Boom, fire roams the ship and surrounds us and the captain shouts, “Half sail!” we all run through the fire sweating rapidly like we were in an oven. We have no choice but to crash on land. We head back to the rocky shore and the ship loudly blows up.
Tristan
I love how you added so much detail your story. It really is a feeling of what was happening.
Hello 🙂 I really like this paragraph 🙂 You included a simple but in my opinion a really cool simile – like we were in the oven! I can imagine what you wrote 🙂 Well Done!
Nikola