14th October 1891
The Great War had begun. In the middle of a moonlit night the brave British soldiers loaded with supplies began to swim across the river to reach their camp. Sadly, only a small number survived as they were easy targets for their enemy, the French. The British decided that there must be another way to cross the river. A plan was made and a new bridge was to be built. The British soldiers could now safely deliver supplies to the camp. Unfortunately, the French were one step ahead and half of the newly built bridge was blown up.
Gus
I loved how you brought The War story from the past to present.
Your story got me excited because once the British decided to cross the river, the French were one step ahead and got them.
It was a great story, it was like you were in the battle.
I love the story. It really made me think hard about the soldiers. I would love to read more of your writing one day.