Spash as I dive into the cool ocean. Just as I come up for a breath I see something flickering in the corner of my eye. It is a glowing green vase. I dive down to it, swimming deeper than I thought. Finally I get there but I don’t want to grab it, it is so slimy but I have to. I bring it on the boat and that’s when I realise it is magic vase but it’s broken. I give it a light rub to get some slime off but a cat lifted out and grew two stories high and says, “Finally it’s time”.
Mack
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It is very interesting. I can’t wait to hear more from you. You have a brain for good writing!
I like your details and how you made the vase magic. I also like when you wrote you rub off the slime and a cat lifted and it grew two stories high.
I liked it , it was detailed and it felt like I was in the story.
Good. How did the vase break?
Good opening but what was the cat?
Great work Mack